Monday, 27 May 2013

Evaluation

For my media unit 23 coursework I have created the opening scene towards a thriller film. Overall I feel that opening has been created rather well, I feel the time spent on the opening was sufficient enough for it to be realistic and entertaining. The opening scene begins with a slow tracking shot which transforms into a medium long shot of a character sat down upon a wall, the reasoning of this shot was for the audience to take note of the character, where he is sat and the location around him. The range of shots I used throughout the film opening were varied but they fitted into the genre of thriller, I wanted to ensure the audience knew what time of film they were watching, and it helped them to feel more involved. I used various medium shots to show two characters at once, and also to show the setting around them, and also long shots were used so that it allowed the audience to view a character from afar, making them more curious as to what he properly looks like, who he is, and what part he has to play. I used close ups various times throughout to emphasize the characters emotions and facial expressions and this helped the audience understand the narrative and what’s going on during that scene.  I gained focus group feedback, and within that feedback I received a couple of comments which said that I should have included more camera angles within the film opening, this would therefore shown off the genre more and kept the typical conventions of a thriller in sight. Throughout the opening scene my main aim was to keep the audience involved and to include lots of use of suspense. To achieve this I ensured that dialogue was kept to a minimum so that the audience would try and guess things for themselves, but for them to be in for a shock or two as the film then progressed. The inclusion of no dialogue also remained in the typical conventions of a thriller and this was one of the contributing factors as to why I decided to do so.  When working as a group I found it hard to agree upon certain things with other group members, one example of this was the choice of sound overlaid on top of the video. One group member disagreed with me that the chosen sound suitable for the video, when in fact I felt that a faster paced track should have been included, which would of helped portray the videos genre to the audience much more clearly. 


Overall I feel that my thriller opening was as good as I could have made it, and had the group members not being a little too relaxed and laid back about it, I feel it could have been made slightly more professionally. However, I didn’t have as much time as the professional filmmakers do, nor the expensive budget they do either, had I of had the same time and money, I feel I could have easily created a much more exciting thriller opening. As location manager, along with group mate Alexander Dean, I feel the settings we chose within the film were well suited for the genre and enhanced the feeling of the film. We chose the co-operative car park as we felt the audience could relate to a supermarket, as its something many of us visit on a daily basis. Although I contributed with ideas towards the editing, colleague Thomas Wood did an extremely good job of editing the video and ensuring that it still made the film exciting and fast paced, and well within the genre.

Monday, 13 May 2013

Detailed Feedback Questionnaire


Feedback.

After creating the opening to a thriller film, I have shown it to a group of classmates who study media and other A level subjects. I have asked them various questions regarding the film opening and how they feel about it. The questions and answers will be displayed below and I will show 2 answers from 2 different classmates.

How did the film show the typical conventions of a thriller film?

Classmate 1: The opening sequence to the film was extremely well thought through, the opening displayed clearly different uses of thriller conventions. One of the main obvious thriller conventions used in this film was the use of lots of different camera angles, these show the quick pace and tempo of the film and clearly show it to be a thriller. The fast paced music over the top and no dialogue included also shows how it’s a thriller, it wants us to feel more interested in what’s going on and keeps us involved and the non included dialogue makes us feel anxious and ready to see more and keep us guessing.

Classmate 2: The scene with the mans feet constantly being shown leading up to the part where the man approaches the boy sat on the wall shows typical conventions of a thriller, quick cuts are used and the feet are shown multiple times, the camera angle during this is low down so we get a sense of feeling from the characters point of view.

What was your overall opinion on the thriller opening?

Classmate 1: Overall I feel the thriller was filmed with good thought and it displayed the typical conventions of a thriller film, the sound chosen over the top of the video matched what was happening during the film, and it suited the genre.

Classmate 2: I feel that the opening thriller scene wasn’t as good as I hoped, the scene lacked action and the exclusion of dialogue made it hard to understand what was happening throughout. The music chosen over the top didn’t really suit what was going on in the scene and wasn’t to a quick enough tempo to match the genre.

If anything could have been made better what would it be, and why should it have been created better?

Classmate 1: I feel that the opening film could have done with even more camera angles just to ensure the film genre was over exaggerated, as I feel that a different audience may have found it difficult to get an understanding of the film with the exclusion of dialogue.  

Classmate 2: I think there are a few things, which could have been done to ensure the film was created better, I think this would be to include more action to show off the genre, also to include dialogue as I found it difficult to understand what was going on